The United States
To some people native or foreign to the United States , it is the best country in the world. Many immigrate to the United States in desperate search for a more opportunistic and promising lifestyle. The United States provides the promise of life, liberty and justice, key things that people of foreign lands are not as fortunate to have. At times I feel both privileged and embarrassed to live in this country but in comparison to other foreign countries, I am happy to call the United States of America home.
No nation is perfect. Just as in foreign nations, America does not fail to elect to corrupt leaders and create unjust laws. Just as in foreign nations, the U.S fails to create lasting organizations and systems to effectively solve both local and domestic disputes, and struggle with economic trouble. With time these problems will improve, but in spite of these issues there are key positive things that persuade immigrants to live in United States .
Another reason why people might want to live in America is because of our strong educational system. With organizations like no child left behind us as a nation lead in the competition of the best and brightest. I will never forget the time I traveled to Brazil this past summer, and what their educational systems were like. Schools were placed in the more advanced parts of town were the poverty stricken children and or adults were to poor to afford because people living in the poorest areas like the favelas which are the slums of places like Salvador de Bahia, have to pay to take the buses that run to different the schools, whereas people living near the school, the middle and upper class people, do not have to pay for transportation. On top of not having the money to attend schools, Brazilians struggle to attend the school because of the distance it is from their households. Schools are purposely placed in areas that the people in poor classes cannot reach or afford simply to keep the poverty stricken in that class of poverty so that they do not advance in society. The system is unfair and truly made me value the education system we have herein America . Though our country struggles with problems as any other one does, I feel proud to be an American citizen and value the rights, freedoms, and opportunities that make it easier to succeed and better myself in life.
'At times I feel both privileged and embarrassed to live in this country but in comparison to other foreign countries, I am happy to call the United States of America home. ' Thats esxactly how I feel.
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Overall, your ideas were coherent and consice. Great job Ashley.