Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Descriptive Order

1) Edible-food-bad food- unhealthy- half cooked- pasta-angel hair noodles- stringy- thrown upon a plate- hanging off an unclean table
2) Supply-pen-small-balll point-black ink-writing swiftly across a papper
3) Store- Tiffany's & Co-gift-shiny-expensive-jewelry-silver gold- 24 karrot-ring-size 6- placed upon a finger- golden brown complexion- ring finger- pretty

 In the first description I am desrcibing the process of Eating unhelathy food. I began with a very broa d topic of something that is edible. This could be anything, and then i went on to break it down by saying it was food that was halfway cooked and ent even further to say that the food was pasta and a specific pasta that i use and how lazily it was thrown upon a plate on an unclean table, leaving readers with a sense of disguist from the description.

The second description is one of a pen. I start off with the broad word "supply" and break it down to a specific supply, what it looks like and what it is doing.

The third description is one of a wedding ring. It begins with  a general store, then breaks down to the specific store and what it looks like and what finger it goes on and how it looks.

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