The bird that flew by
distinctly caught my right eye
beautiful it was
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My birthstone is blue
celebrate in December
1st 1993
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Rain drowns the my plant
under the water like sea
the beauty unseen,
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Cupcake and Icecream
Delicious it is to me
I am to happy
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Sun upon my fae
the hottest its ever been
Need to find the shade
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Chicken and Tofu
Vegetables of all sort
I ate good tonight
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It is way to hot
I must find a shaded place
I drink some water
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I smell amazing
Juicy Courture perfume
I am ready now
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Its Intuition
Ive got this crazy feeling
That your will mess up
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I wonder what happens
when spirits are in heaven
I can wait to see
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On this haiku:
ReplyDelete'Cupcake and Icecream
Delicious it is to me
I am to happy'
You could have written "too happy" or "so happy", in order to be sort of gramatically correct.
On this one:
'Sun upon my fae
the hottest its ever been
Need to find the shade'
Do you mean "face"?
This one:
'It is way to hot
I must find a shaded place
I drink some water'
Again, use "too" to be gramatically correct. "Too is used as "also" and when is "much more" of something.
Ex:I like that teddy bear,too.
The highway is too icy to drive.
Overall, good job and such elegance in these haikus.